Once upon a time there was a girl name Paola who got lost and couldn't find her mom and dad .She was crying and crying she couldn't stop crying .So than she went to the police and asked him if he could help her so .He did and they found her mom and dad and stopped crying and they said thank you to the police and left home.
I really enjoy some part of your story,because it is sad but it is good. It made me think about thing that happen to me and you should look were do you make a mistake.
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