Friday, November 18, 2011

The Lovely Bones

Once there was a girl named Susan who got murdered by her neighbor on December 16, 1978. She thought she was still alive but when she entered the house she saw her dad and mom with the police and she was calling her mom and her mom could not hear.  Her  sister  got inside the neighbor house and saw a book of all the  people he murdered  and saw her sisters hair and face in the book. she heard a noises  and she started to run and the man also tried to run but  he could not get her. She tried to tell her dad but her dad was not paying attention to her. The girls friend fainted and the boyfriend went inside and saw her and her face was like Susan and he kissed her.

1 comment:

  1. This story was very delightful. Watch out for the "ands" in your sentences.

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